Teacher feedback

As part of my feedback , I was given some points in which I could improve my cover , contents page and double page spread.

Cover

-Reposition cover image
-Reposition sell lines

Contents page

-The images need cropping
-Add subheadings underneath the sell lines
-Look at kerning as there is too much space

Double page spread

-The page number is too big
-The pages are too text heavy
-The fill quote should be positioned in the centre of the page
-There should be a bigger contrast to text used in the subheading

I took this advice , but mainly concentrated on the contents page and double page spread as I though my cover was the strongest. I went back through the work and readdressed and recreated the two pieces from scratch , making they appear more modern and up to date for audiences. Before the were very plain and lacked any real interesting elements but I think that they have been improved vastly.