Are you ready for the weekend? article

This is was my induction task and I was asked to create an article for a music magazine.I had to choose the artist and try to feature conventions such as main images and titles:


                 First draft                                                                                             Second draft

My target was to focus on the present tense as past can be included to an extent , but my article had too much. I need to avoid creating a timeline of the article and focus on new content as young explorers want to find out the latest gossip. I tried to make the masthead bigger and the start of the article in bold to highlight what information is included in the columns.